Monday, April 15, 2013

Fugitive Language


simile- a figure of speech in which two unlike things are compared, as in using "like" or "as"
metaphor- A figure of speech where a term is applied, but not literally meaning it and does not use "like" or "as"

"Out of the blue I remember when the kids were little, crammed into the back of the car like cigars wedged in a box, and I would sing to them." Simile (page 39)
"Trailing her spine, like a line of small blue jewels, are a string of bruises." Simile (Page 28)
"He claps his hands together, as if he is gearing up for a football game." Simile (Page 34)
"Vern's face is like a souffle.." Simile (Page 51)
"My mother pushing the nurse's call button over and over, as if it's the trigger to a bomb." Simile (page 52)


“My children are a natural alarm clock; the thought of Kate sleeping so late makes me remember that she’s been sniffling lately, and then wonder if that’s why she was so tired last night” Metaphor (Page 33)
"Moments like this are the same kind of vacuum; no matter what you cling to, you always wind up being sucked in." Metaphor (Page 11)
"My children are a natural alarm clock; the thought of Kate sleeping so late makes me remember that she's been sniffling lately...." Metaphor (Page 28)
"A women," I say, "isn't all different from a bonfire" (Page 41)
"Her voice is a feather, a thread." Metaphor (Page 70)

I think by putting in things such as similies and metaphors adding them to books are very vital in a good book. This makes you really think and devour the information you are learning in the book. It also makes the story more interesting and you will be able to more understand and enjoy the book.

















Tuesday, April 9, 2013

My Sisters Keeper Jodi Picoult



          Jodi is 46 years old as of today and is the author of best selling books(21 of them). She studied creative arts at Princeton University. After she graduated from Princeton she had a series of many different jobs which include the following as a technical writer for a Wall Street brokerage firm, as a copywriter at an ad agency, as an editor at a textbook publisher, and as an 8th grade English teacher - before entering Harvard to pursue a master’s in education. She married a young lad by the name of Tim Van Leer who she had met initially at Princeton. At the current moment she has had three kids with Tim and they are living in Hanover, New Hampshire, they also have two Springer spaniels, two rescue puppies, two donkeys, two geese, eight chickens, and the occasional Holstein. 
            
            In the book My Sister's Keeper there is the older sister named Anna who is 13 years old. She feels as if she is being constantly used all her life by her sister Kate. This is because Anna has the same bone narrow as her sister and she has to go through countless surgeries and such for the life of her sister. She then decides and realizes how she has been used and now it changed the lives of herself and her families drastically. 
  
        I think I am somewhat of a keeper to my friend. He keeps me in check and I keep him in check. We have become very close since high school has started and we will continue that friendship forever now. We make sure the other is keeping up with their homework and grades. We also make sure the other is lifting getting ready for football and other athletics. We also make sure that one another is making the right decisions just in life and moving forward. It is great to have that type of friend and be that type of friend because you will be confident you will not slack because there is someone there to help pick you up. Also it is important for me to keep my teammates in check in whatever way possible because it is a responsibility as teammates. We are to make sure that nothing they do will harm them and there chances of succeeding in any way! 



       

Sunday, April 7, 2013

Chris Essay


Chris McCandless: Hero or Fool?
By: Kishan
Does Chris McCandless deserving of being known as a hero to humanity or a deficit to humanity and a person corrupting the youth? McCandless is a young kid looking for happiness through an extreme way of isolating himself from humanity and friends. He left all his friends and family to pursue happiness. People now argue over whether it was the correct decision, if he deserved to die and if he was a fool or a hero to people all over the world. Chris McCandless was more then just a regular person, he was a hero, he was a pioneer and example to all that you should truly chase what makes you happy, but you should know where, how, and what true happiness is first.
Chris was a hero because he had an undeniable determination for what he set his mind to and knew fully about the consequences that may come from his decision. “He wanted to prove to himself that he could make it on his own, without anybody else’s help,” Stuckey said this is what Chris told him (Krakauer) pg. 159. A man with determination that will not quite, like literally not stop till death is hard to come by and Chris was one of those. He was someone that all can learn from, if you want something or love something go out and do it. It will not matter if anyone says “no you can’t do it” Chris always did and always came up out of every situation. He was a unique person and he had a unique drive that young men want to have and need in some situations, but he just took it too far in some situations.
This young man was doing this all for himself making a point for his life, doing something out of the ordinary and sure he wasn't perfect in his decisions, but he was close to it and he almost made it out alive and well, which everyone would have thought he was a heroic figure to do such a deed. “McCandless was thrilled to be on his way north, and he was relieved as well-relieved that he had again evaded the threat of human intimacy of friendship. (Krakauer pg.55)” He lived for the purpose of living. In my mind everyone does die, but not everybody lives. He showed people to be something special and to do what they think is right. Everyone makes mistake, but not everyone makes those mistakes worth it. Chris, he ended up making his mistake worth it and left his mark on the world. It never really mattered to him if he was known or not and it is obvious if you read the book Into the Wild, but for all the critics and haters of this man you still are talking about him and he has made a mark no matter what anyone says or does.
Chris was a proven risk taker; he could handle himself and would come out on top of whatever adventure he took. He just had that confidence mojo, he was arrogant to some, but his story his actions and his past proves that he earned all the arrogance he displays. Jan Burres said, “He was smart. He’d figured out how to paddle a canoe down to Mexico, how to hop freight trains, how to score a bed at inner-city missions. He figured that entire out on his own and I felt sure he’d figure out Alaska, too. (Krakauer pg. 38)” Chris had that mojo that reminds me of a champion someone that knows he is the best and can do what he is doing. That gives me a role model type look from him because I was told to be the best I was supposed to act like the best. He also did what he did because he had earned the right of saying and doing things because he was proven to be able to survive in horrible conditions.
Chris was unprepared and not ready for the adventure he had taken upon and was a lunatic that is corrupting the youths mind. “Alex admitted that the only food in his pack was a ten-pound bag of rice. His gear seemed exceedingly minimal for the harsh conditions of the interior, which in April still lay buried under the winter snowpack. Alex’s cheap leather hiking boots were neither waterproof nor well insulated. His rifle was only .22 calibers, arbore too small to rely on if he expected to kill large animals (Krakauer pg. 7).” McCandless wanted to be less prepared because he wanted the full experience with no shortcuts, he was an intelligent kid and was evident to all that met him and he did not do this for fame he did it for himself, to find happiness. “The heaviest item in McCandless’s half full backpack was his library: 9 or 10 paperbound books, most of which were given to him by Jan Burres in Niland (Krakauer pg. 162).”
Chris was a young adult, on the brinks of becoming a man dealing with so much for so long he had it and just wanted to find himself some peace and happiness with himself and decided going on this improbable adventure would find him happiness which made him a hero for pursuing what he believed in however, he did not truly know what happiness was when he went on this journey and it was too late for him, but we should all look up to this man sure he had some faults, but that does not change the heroicness and bravery he portrayed to mankind.  Chris is a hero he may not have been prepared in others minds, but he knew what he was capable of and almost made it with what he brought. McCandless was looking for some self-pleasure, not to have happiness and be a star, but just to be happy and find it doing something crazy which he wasn't perfect at it, but he was sure close and if he had a couple things not be so unlucky he would still be alive today, maybe regarded as a legend and looked upon as a hero. He was a man of adventure he was good at it too.  I want you, as the reader, to understand that Chris was an extraordinary person and he was a role model to some, but you should not go as crazy or extreme as him because he made a mistake on what true happiness was, but you should be yourself and do what will make you happy, but make sure you know what being happy is.

Saturday, March 9, 2013

Journey through Kish's mind, adventure

I think the adventures of these terrific and outstanding men was totally worth it. Chris was fully aware of what he was doing and he wanted to do this, he had his mind set and was determined and I have always believed that when a man is determined no matter what you do, what you say nothing will stop him from reaching his goal and it was evident in what Chris did. This man is a role model to some now which is just a humbling experience to have. I would go on this kind of adventure, I would love an adventure like this, but I would not be able to go because of missing my parents and friends. It would be mind boggling just to be away from all the distractions in the world and just be myself. It would be a blessing, but I am not sure how I would be able to attempt certain things risking life without accomplishing all of my dreams, unlike these men I am not doing it for the love of being alone I would do it for the experience of relaxation and adventure. I have no problem with my family or friends, but that does not mean I would not enjoy an adventure like this of total solitude just to myself thinking about dreams and what I want to be like. That's what I would do in a trip like this not exactly remove myself from society, but take a break to realize what I want, who I am, and what I will become! It is very intriguing to think of myself doing all those wonderful things and knowing the kind of person I am, my personal thoughts would be I am indomitable and think that I would be able to accomplish this as an athlete and at least an average/ above average student. I would be escaping the daily pressures of living up to high standards, getting good grades, and putting in work for a sport. I would also be away from all the unnecessary drama, drug, and whose been with more girls and all of a high school student. I would not be worried of anyone trying to mess with me or one of my boys. These are the things I think a lot of high school students would think of when being asked on how to be totally relaxed and life by yourself away from society. Personally I have extreme standards for myself and I need to be successful if not, I'm just failing myself, so this would be an opportunity to just let all the expectations go and live. The things I would miss is the daily competition that I love and adore in sports. I would miss it so much it would start killing my insides. I would also miss setting expectations for myself I may hate it at times, but in the end it is something that makes me, me and I love it. The most important thing I would miss is my parents, no matter the struggles we go through I love them to death and if you mess with my parents I will get pissed off and it won't be pretty they sacrificed for me and loved me, I can not let myself disrespect that.

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Canton


Kishan
Aquas
Mrs. Z 2/13/13
Canton
Canton, Ohio is a historic place to some people and a tourist attraction place in Ohio. The city holds highly the Professional Football Hall of Fame. This is a short paper talking about a place in which I would enjoy and wish I may go to and will talk about why and how I would go there. To get into the hall of fame as a spectator/tourist you have to get admission for a small cost considering the great sight and wild emotions go through yourself if you are a football fan! The admission rates are Adults - $22.00 Seniors (ages 62 and over) - $18.00 Children (ages 6-12) - $16.00 Children (5 and under) – FREE, while the hours are 9:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m (Christmas Day closed) and the extended summer hours (Memorial Day through Labor Day) are 9:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. You can either call ahead to get tickets or just buy them at the store(all info came from http://www.profootballhof.com).However, instead of worrying about how much it takes to get in and how you get in let us worry about how to get there. Personally from the John Carroll School I would just decide to take a road trip and drive there. The cost of gas for driving from The John Carroll School would be $36.64 with a car that averages 35 on local and 38 mpg on highway. The total amount of time to arrive at Canton would be around 6 hrs. and 30 min. barring any major traffic. This information was obtained from mapquest.com.  To stay you could get a local motel room which would be relatively cheap!
Now that the information part of this paper is completed I will now start talking about why I want to go there and when. I would love to go to Canton and I would want to do it during the summer because that is when football season is coming up to the grind part for me personally. I would chose the middle of July because that is when camp and two a days are just around the corner and I need a reminder sometimes that I should always give it my all. The motivation and emotions that would go through myself personally would be unfathomable to think of the high motivation I would receive from visiting the Pro Football Hall of Fame. I would be surrounded in that building by what respect that the greatest players in NFL history reside, where their hard work got them, where their legacy will forever reside. It would be a blessing and remind me to work hard and that hard work always will pay off as long as you keep grinding and never let down. This would be a reminder because I would have all the evidence and stories laid out right in front of my eyes to see and it would be impossible not to believe that hard work will accomplish my goals. It would just be an awing experience, especially if I took the trip senior year with my close friends and the expected captains, the emotions we would all have would just be humbling. This is why and how I would go to Canton for a trip and the reasons I wish to go there.

Thursday, February 7, 2013

Into The Wild

Kishan P
Mrs.Zurkowski
Aqua English
Into the Wild Preview

The new book in which our English class will be going over and reading together individually and as a class, Into the Wild, was written by John Krakauer. Chris grew up on in the state of Virginia as a child. This story was based upon a true story about the actual life travels the man had to face and death of Christopher Mccandless. In the book Christopher is a graduate of the University of Emory. A short period elapsed after he graduate college that he gave up basically all his money and his possessions, he also changed his name to Alexander Supertramp. He stopped contact with all friends and family that he had and at the time they were puzzled at what he did. He was found dead in an abandoned bus in Alaska where he arrived hiking. He had taken with him 10 pounds of rice, a rifle, camera, and a field guide to all the plants that he would be able to eat in the area and he survived around 119 days in Alaska with only those things taken with him. The book goes into some detail about his journey throughout his remarkable experience and the bravery and boldness it took to go after such an expedition.

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Conflict


Mrs. Zurkowski
Aquas
2/01/13
Conflict
Have you ever been in a fight with a parent, friend, or coach, or even faced with a difficult situation in which you have to find a solution? A conflict is an unpleasant situation in which you are in an opposing side with some opposing forces or a group of opposing forces such as person vsperson; nature; society; self; fate/God(http://www.bathcsd.org/webpages/edepartment/literary_terms.cfm). William Shakespeare uses conflict to display the struggle that comes with love in multiple events in the book MND throughout the play with the most notable parts in the play are based off the conflict of the play.
William Shakespeare uses the widely used technique conflict in many ways in his writings such as when the four lovers not loving the correct people, the father of Hermia not approving her of her marriage with Lysander which was her true love, and the fight for the Indian Boy between Oberon and Titania. “Either to die, or to abjure forever the society of men (act 1, scene 1, line 67-68).” This is a quote that explains the consequences of the conflict between Egues and Hermia because she was not being allowed to love her true love in which was Lysander. “O, that your frowns would teach my smiles such skill (Act 1, Scene 1, lines 199-200).” This particular quote refers to Helena asking Hermia how she gets Demetrius to love her so much and she doesn’t get any love while she truly loves him while Hermia just tries to blow him off and wish that he would just leave her. This quote proves that in the story the conflict of the right lovers not loving each other is true and proof that conflict is troublesome, but has to be resolved in some way and it will be difficuly. “The Fairyland bays not the child of mine (Act 2, Scene 1, Line 126).” There are many different ways in which Shakespeare portrays the technique of conflict in his story to make the story more interesting and give it a kind of purpose for the reader to enjoy and think about also to prove that it is a great literary term which is needed for an outstanding book such as his.
There are many struggles in a person’s everyday life; there are struggles in love, sports, school/home life. Some examples of struggles that a person can go through are these: The Baltimore Ravens had many conflicts and struggles throughout the year, but that did not stop and they had solutions to all of them and didn’t let it take them down, and finally they made it as World Champions. There was an intriguing conflict between the young high schooler with either picking to go to optional practice during the summer or miss it for a week just to relax, but he knew the right decision was grinding at practice. The young college student had a conflict with his girlfriend in which they were in a serious relationship for 2 years, but they had a major fight and now they just don’t know if they love each other anymore.
Conflict has been proven to be apart of life for all people and it’s been proven through examples of Shakespeare and modern life in this essay on conflict. The essay went over multiple points such as a life as a highschool athlete, a young lover looking to find the perfect one, and also Shakespeare. This essay was meant to convey the importance and how conflict is used in everyday life and in books!